There was actually a page one that was somewhat finished at one point. I should probably post that here as well even though I found it a bit awkward, and not quite the drawing style I was going for. I just chalk that up to it being the first page. We had to get it out of the way first, so we could progress with the rest of the story.
This is the inked first page:
And here is the finished page with color:
.......................At any rate, I think we all are on the same page now (writer, penciller, and inker). We'll see; we're trying not to take this too seriously for now - just having fun. Stay tooned!
PS - Ideas, suggestions, and constructive criticism welcome!